Gdes2014 Peer Assessment, Optional Tutorials & Final Hand In

Peer Assessment and onwards
Our last session pre the Christmas break saw students 'peer assessing' each other's work thus far. With luck this will have given you each additional valuable feedback on top of that given by peers, tutors and your clients via Skype chats in previous weeks of the module.

Peer Assess Quick Ref Pics
I only managed to grab  a few quick ref pics in this session but have put a few images below of Sophy's lovely paper cut outs and Zoe's dynamic, colourful spreads as they stand at the moment.

Intricate cut-out characters as created by Sophy for her work to date.

One of two quick ref pics of Zoe's work to date. Lovely
character development here and ideas for activities.

The second of two quick refs to Zoe's work to date.

Optional tutorials after the break
We're back tues 3rd January and I thought I'd offer-up 'first-come/ first-served' tutorials one day this week as a final set of additional feed-in and help to you.

These tutorials will be informal, around 20 mins long and can either be 1-1 in the DAC at UW (or) via Skype if you wish to help save you a journey and money travelling etc. The date/times are as follows:

Wed 4th January:

• 10.30am > 10.50am
• 11am > 11.20am
• 11.30am > 11.50am
• 12 midday > 12.20pm
• 12.30pm > 12.50pm: Booked - Genevieve Ohene Ampong

Final Hand-In: Friday 13th Jan, 11am > Midday
As mentioned on both the brief and your timetable, hand-in will be from 11am > 12 midday in the usual room. We'll aim to display all final design boards during that time (please check your brief for the requirements on hand-in). Additionally, we're hoping that your clients from the National Archives can be free to join us for that period to see final work in situ and also to chat to students who've worked on the project..

You'll be expected to provide:
1. Your final design board with elements on it (see brief docs for details).
2. Your final 1500 word reflective report. (I'll send top tips/details in an e-mail re this).
3. Your completed research and development journal blog (with research, devts, visits, session refs that have influenced you, sketches from rough to refined etc).
4. Any sketch books you wish to submit (ideally with notes explaining what's what on there).
5. Your printed SOLE submission sheet (loose so we can put them all in an envelope and send to our admin folks please.
6. A CD or memory stick with the following:

- Your final InDesign file(s) for your spreads.
- Any supporting Photoshop or Illustrator files that you've brought into your final InDesign file(s).
- Ideally a separate .pdf of each of your final spreads. 
- A separate folder which shows earlier devt work which you worked on (but may have changed your mind about etc after feedback).

• I'll send further details/reminders of the above in an e-mail to you all too.

Otherwise.. Have a great Christmas! See you afterwards.. :)

Gdes2014 Tutorials Feedback

Thanks to all those who came along to last week's in-session mandatory tutorials. Lynda and I sat and looked at progress with the majority of you and fed-back/made suggests where able too. 

Our general pointers to you all after tutorials:

1. Tip! Make sure the National Archives features in the work, either by getting the children to research their website for info (tricky with KS1 - lots of wordy documents), or including photos from their site where possible.

2. Tip! Remember to have the 2 logos (Nat Archives and UW) on the front and back cover. For rough positionals, these can be grabbed from Google images but we will source .eps or .pdf versions for you nearer the time you're creating final artworks.

3. Tip! Use InDesign for assembling your final pages (this is why we laid on InDesign tutorials to make sure all were able with basics), creating images/diagrams etc in Illustrator and/or Photoshop and then importing them into your final InDesign pages/spreads.

3. Tip! Remember to print out and check the actual size of your layout and make sure it works in practice (make sure space for writing etc).

4. Tip! 'Activity Pages' which use cut-outs or folding features are to be put on separate A4 print-out sheets so that they can be used without 'spoiling' any printed colour info sheets or spreads you create.

5. Tip! If you haven't already, then we'd really expect a number of posts showing that you've checked-out KS1 materials online and some comments as to what you made of them and how you think these might/or have influenced your own ideas etc..

Tutorials Feedback
As an additional aide to your feedback we thought it's be useful to try to put a quick line of feedback next to as many of your names at this point in time as possible too (below). Please check it all out if you need a reminder of the conversations had with us.

Lynda's Tutorials:

Those who missed their mandatory tutorials with Lynda (& didn't send a courtesy mail in advance to explain):
Ollie Davis, Caz Durston, Holly Leak, Laura Thompson and Maddie Tunstall

Charlotte Halliday
Some lovely work with ideas in place for the cover and lots of layouts working well for activities with extra options for fast workers or take home activities. She is going to submit her work in English and Welsh so a great USP there. The Welsh text will be checked/proof read by a former teacher - so great to have that professional approach. Will need to bear in mind the requirement to work in InDesign ultimately as possibly wasn't made clear in discussions..

Dan Mills
Some nice paper craft ideas. Needs to prototype to check it’s working as intended. Great cover with nice illustration - nicely en route, add logos and continue theme onto a back cover.

Gen Oheneampong
Still has a fair bit to do but on track. Ideas finalised - good, ready to get onto layouts.

Kersti Heido
Unfortunate crashing laptop, we're hoping the word doc can be retrieved to turn into a blog. Good example of why blog is preferable here, saved in the clouds (and not on hard drive).
Almost there with activity ideas - needs to finalise Florence ideas. Cover to do, some way way to go yet.

Laura Paice
Lovely blog all up to date. Good research. Some initial confusion re how to best pull ideas together for the 3 people - but hopefully now clearer. Cover still to do. Nice illustration ideas.

Ele Watson
Layouts done for booklet to house activites for chosen 3 people. Suggested getting the children to research if poss, rather then providing (all) the info. Ideal user testing potential through sister who is primary teacher and after school club where Ele works. Lots of activity ideas for kids to colour in, add patterns etc. Suggested some ‘role play’ scenarios for plenary activity. Next step is to work up layouts in InDesign. Good blog with lots of research.

Jack Vaughan
Again, suggsted getting children to be more proactive in ‘finding out’, nice activity ideas with cutting out and rescuing Elizabeth from the tower! Remember to print out layouts and check space available for 5-7 years olds for tasks. Slightly sophisticated text on cover - reminded Jack to check out KS1 covers for reference and make sure this evidenced on his journal blog as research too.

Andy's Tutorials

Those who missed their mandatory tutorials with Lynda (& didn't send a courtesy mail in advance to explain):
Michael Finch

Kate Bryant
To check out Noor Khan’s YouTube Videos.. Some really lovely character devt work here. Make sure that has good x-section of KS1 refs in research too from different sources.. Kate has a younger brother 7yrs to test on + his mates so has a user testing plan in hand..

Laura Cottle
Check out YouTube Videos on Noor Khan. Some good initial ideas underway now and Laura has a plan for the Prototypes session. Needs to add content to blog as it is at present a bit 'thin' (but Laura is aware of this). The blog really needs more: research findings, primary and secondary.. Also needs KS1 refs and Laura's comments on these to help show that she has explored this direction too. Needs ref to Archives visit and (ideally) pics as per other students' blogs. Thinking about dyslexic readers - a great angle with some additional thinking that would be used if elements were taken further than this project to interactive elements too..

Katie Dolan
Has set of content coming together - inc. some good early cross sections of key buildings linked to Shakespeare - but needs to add all of this to blog posts and add her own (expansive) comments.. Some lovely early character devt ongoing in sketch form and in ills form. Explained about the mix of Archives photos and illustrations on page..

Beth Hawthorne
Good blog contents and work coming on, useful notes from Beth on these too, nice sketches in sketchbook at present. Needs to pull it all together now on the blog/scan sketches. Has mum who’s a TA - can user test so has a user test battle plan too - good. 

Kirby Jennings
Kirby to check out WW1 eCookbook on Module Blog for ref and style guides..
Good work evidenced here across media, definitely heading in the right direction, good sketches and staged devt of these. Suggested that Kirby make sure there’s a mix of National Archives images as well as any illustrations on spreads etc..


Zoe Marriner
Good progress here in sketch form and on to digital in ilustrador etc. Good early prototype work that Zoe should be pelase with. Sugegsted that Zoe make sure add to add all refs to blog and to have a mix of Archives pies as well as illustrations.

Dani Newman
Good visual progress, in process of digitizing her sketches. Has some really good content and research on her blog - and with ref links used too (good work).. Will have further visual progress evident next session in readiness for the ‘prototypes’ deadline.

Sophy Pickering
Good practical work evidenced here - some really lovely cut outs especially - great effect. Blog coming along too - but needs to add more content research-wise and KS1-wise (especially visual refs) with her own thoughts added to this too.

Dani Shaw
Good work ongoing, sketch devts coming along but have advised more Key Stage 1 examples on blog + analysis of to help make her research broader evidenced… Some good blog content though but tends to be more visual initially and then mainly typed latter posts - ideally keep a mix of visual as well as written thoughts here..

Liam Turner
Good work evident with early and recent blog posts - good write-ups and notes on these especially. Needs more Key stage 1 refs and analysis on his blog though ideally to help make more rounded still. Has already started to do early screen mock ups so progress is good at this time..

Darrin Tucker
Darrin has some quick line sketches starting to appear at this time in his sketchbook but these seem a little thinner on the ground than many of his peers' work at this stage that we've seen. Darrin has made a start on his blog but acknowledges that there's a lot of content he still needs to add to make it a rounder blog - especially so research-wise and KS1-wise + his own comments and thoughts. Darrin's promised to have more completed and worked through by the 'prototypes' deadline in the next session.

Gdes2014 1-1 Tutorials With Lynda & Andy

These tutorials are informal but mandatory, we’ll be adding our findings from these to our marking notes per person. They will last 10 minutes each as we have so many students to see during session time.

Key things we’ll want to see evidence of (blog posts, sketches, notes etc):

1.    Blog posts & sketchbooks with a mix of session refs, research findings + your own notes on these and evidence of your sketch devts over the last couple of weeks + your notes on these.

2.    Your final decisions with sketch ideas + your notes on these.

3.    Your forecast of what you’ll have the following week when we have our ‘prototypes deadline’ with early work on screen underway.

Katie Bryant	9.30am - Andy
Megan Chiossi	9.30am - Lynda
Laura Cottle	9.45am - Andy
Ollie Davis	9.45am - Lynda
Katie Dolan	10.00am - Andy
Caz Durston	10.00am - Lynda
Michael Finch	10.15am - Andy
Charlotte Halliday	10.15am - Lynda
Beth Hawthorne	10.30am - Andy
Kersti Heido	10.30am - Lynda
Kirby Jennings	11.00am - Andy
Holly Leak	11.00am – Lynda
Zoe Marriner	11.15am - Andy
Dan Mills	11.15am – Lynda
Dannii Newman	11.30am – Andy
Gen Oheneampong	11.30am – Lynda
Megan Osbourne	11.45am – Andy
Laura Paice	11.45am – Lynda
Sophy Pickering	12.00pm - Andy
Ashley Poyner	12.00pm – Lynda
Dani Shaw	12.15pm – Andy
Laura Thompson	12.15pm – Lynda
Darrin Tucker	12.30pm – Andy
Maddie Tunstall	12.30pm – Lynda
Liam Turner	12.45pm – Andy
Jack Vaughan	12.45pm - Lynda
Ele Watson	1.00pm - Andy
James Watson	1.00pm - Lynda

WW1 Children's eCookbook - Reference Page

Here's a link to the final eBook and activity sheets generated from selected student outputs from the last Children's Book Design module.. This is now 'out there' being used by children at libraries in the region as well as by the National Archives. We've had some lovely feedback already on this, including:

"It (the eBook) has gone out the Droitwich library who are really thrilled with it and are now using it with school groups. The eBook's also going to used by similar school groups down in Hemel Hempsted and it'll be in use at Pershore Library for their WW1 event too."

Professor Maggie Andrews, University of Worcester

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzWcB9cnSqS7MzNVRm0zQ0RHUm8/view?usp=sharing

Gdes2014 Responses to Key Q's From Clients

Lauren:
Terminology – is it ok to name Elizabeth I as ‘The Virgin Queen’ – presumably they will think it’s just a name without understanding the actual terms used. Is this ok, or better to stick just to Eliz. I? 

Annie:
Hm that’s a tricky one and a bit of a judgement call. I would check out and see if BBC have used it, and if they have, go for it. If not, I’d get rid of it- anything that makes you think twice, it’s safer just to edit out.

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Lauren:
Some of the students wanted to do three activities for each person and mini booklets for each individual – I suggested this was ok but to bear in mind the length of the lesson. Do you agree? Do you have anything to add to this?


Annie:
I agree, that sounds super! It would be important I think to make them obviously a ‘set’ of three, rather than 3 individual booklets- e.g similar design, similar activities/questions.
 
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Lauren:
Do we have a preference for front covers i.e. just title, or also subtitles and/or visual? And what do we want the title to be? I suggested that it was up to them as to whether include just the title, or also include other info and visuals and suggested the title was up to them too – so long as it was clear that these were significant people in British history. 


Annie:
Ideally, I think a front cover should be quite enticing and visual. Other than that, I am quite open. It doesn’t need to be ‘significant people’- that’s quite challenging language- so another title would also work.


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Lauren:
One student wanted to also include the information about what instruments Flo Nightingale used in nursing  but was worried that, because some of these are quite gruesome, it might be inappropriate. What do you think? I would have thought that it didn’t matter as Horrible Histories is really gruesome  and kids love it… but I could be wrong here! 


Annie:
I agree, keep them in- but describe them sensitively e.g instead of saying ‘this was used to rip out eyeballs’ or whatever, you could explain it was used to help someone’s eye feel better if it was hurt. Something like that? Again, I think if it makes you feel uncomfortable, take it out, but there’s certainly ways of making it work if that’s what you want to do.
 
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Lauren:
Is A4 ok – we thought that might be the best size for teachers to print out, but do you think two A5's on one side would also work? 


Annie:
I agree A4 is probs best. Smaller ages tend to need larger spaces to write on (this took me ages to figure out- your instinct is that  smaller children would want smaller spaces to work on, but the opposite it true) A5 would be fine too (although it would need to be configured so it was easy to print), but be aware of them needing lots of space if they are writing, drawing etc.

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Lauren:
Do we want students to include teacher handbook/notes for teachers on how to use the resource? My instinct was to say 'no' as it would give the teacher flexibility on how to use the resource, and the worksheets should be obvious and clear as to how to be used. But you may have other ideas….? 


Annie:
Agree here. I think a teacher’s notes section is fine and sometimes useful- do include if you want. BUT I would be aware of using this as a crutch- if your activity isn’t easy to understand from the book itself, think why not? How could you make it easier to understand? You don’t want the teacher to have to talk them through it step-by-step.

Gdes2014 'Live' Skype Feedback on Rough Work From Clients

As well as feedback from their peers in learning teams and tutors, students were able to ask any uncertainties of their clients this week at roughs deadline. 

Each learning team was able to talk to client Lauren in real time video conversation and to ask both any questions that had arisen and to get soundings if needed on their initial ideas and thinking.

Here's a couple of quick pictures (courtesy of Lynda - big thanks) of some of the live cliennt conversations:

Client Lauren responding to questions from students.

Another view of the learning team students & tutor Andy as the live client
discussions were ongoing.

Gdes2014 - Quick Rough Work Examples & Live Skype Discussions

Our last session included a 'live' Skype discussion and Q+A session with clients as well as both learning team and tutor feedback on sketches supplied for the 'roughs deadline'.. 

Here's a few quick examples of some of these rough ideas to date linked to the National Archives brief. As a comparison, I've also added a couple of examples of student rough work from 2015 when we created our WW1 Home Front eActivity Book (that the National Archives used over the summer for on site activites).

Sample student roughs 2016

Some interesting early ideas for activities from Kirby. Good too as these
have been based on both a range of research and a knowledge of
how children learn from our previous week's session.

Some good early ideas from Zoe linked to her characters. After talking to Zoe
I think she was keen to evolve these further having listened to others
in her learning team discuss their ideas and next steps.

Dannii's early ideas and some great initial thinking on characters here. These
ideas received some very positive feedback from both learning team
peers and also the tutors. good early thinking here..

Michael's early ideas - utilising maps and infographics such as
timelines. I liked the individual quotes aspect of these too.

Sample student roughs 2015

Student Jack's early roughs at deadline. Some nice early refs to
both colours and characters.

Student Luma's early roughs - utilising a 'scrapbook' format idea.

Student Lauren's early examples at rough deadline. Some initial thinking
on colour use starting to come in here too.